Very well done throughout. Closer editing would help with punctuation issues. Authors of philosophical/scientific treatises should not be referred to only by their first name. The portion of your writing obtained from sources did not include the footnotes, end notes, references and quotes. Future submitals without the applicable source references will not be accepted. It surprises me that as an Honors student with as strong writing skills as yours, you seemed to have spend very little time revising or applying the standards to this piece. You are well aware of the detriment to your PBK designation. You were graded for content which was well researched, well thought out and compiled, but all your usual techniques were absent. Future assignments will not be as elementary and I will not grade you on the same scale as non honors undergrads as I have done here.
Grade: 100 out of 100 - this will also mean a 10% weight on your final grade.
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